Saturday, June 4, 2011

Blues and Whites

Glowing Blues, Gleaming Whites

inner fires shimmer with greens and reds
beauty that attracts the Unwanted eyes
Ripped from their rough beds of brown
their flames blaze Defiantly through the dust
the Mothers scent fades from them
the flames have Vanished

faded blues, tarnished whites

-Revan Kohl

I wrote that poem for a creative writing class I took. I decided to post it since I haven't posted in awhile and I just felt like it I guess... I'm hungry... Meh... Food...

Never mind, I'm not hungry anymore...

4 comments:

Rudy said...

Nice. Pretty visually stimulating with the colors.

lol that line is from the Simpsons right? XD

Revan Kohl said...

Hmm...? Which line?

Rudy said...

Knife goes in, guts come out. :D

Revan Kohl said...

Ah, well I don't watch the Simpsons so I wouldn't know. It's funny though